In time of During our last class we watched an interesting and a little strange movie. First
of all I want to tell you that it was a really very very good day . On That day we finished our classes and it was very difficult to focus to on the movie . I will tell anything which everything that I remmember . The movie was about a familiy which didn't have a child . And one day they had writed wrote their dreams and wishes about the child and buried the box with them in the
ground. Then rain came and a child appeared from a place where the box
was . And now I have to write the continuation of the movie . I think
that the boy would grow up and would become a persone who parents
wanted. And I missed to tell that there were some leaves on the foots feet of the child. I think they will dissappear some time later.

Good job, but to be honest I expected you to write a whole continuation of the story !!!

writted is wrong . instead of this must be written . spears are wrong too . instead of this must be leaves
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good job, you recognized your mistakes !!!