THE leaves hurried across the park in a gance of browb and gold and red.Ellen Harl were walking through the trees in the last of the daylight.Harl said"I decided to go a long time ago","Eight years,Ellen said slowly .Eight without summer or winter.Soon Harl suggested that Hellen will go travel with him because the scientists are needed.But Ellen said that she can't do that.She need to see trees ,flowers.......Harl moved away from her. "There you are,he said.WE both want different things,..."When I get back,I'II say hello to oyur great-great-granddaughter.Perahaps I'II marry her.Ellen said that she can;t understand how that can be true.So we leave Earth in the year 2029 and return in 2129 but we ourselves will only be eight years older."here will be other pepople;Harl said.If I marry her,we will call our oldest daugher Ellen."There will be no wives for you in the world pf 2129,Ellen said. Harl turned to look att her."You really mean that,dont you?Why not?''Because the world will be a very different place then,she answered To the people of 2129,you will be stranger than a wild animal in a zoo."Why?asked Harl. "Because;Ellen said slowly;you won't be a telepath.
THE leaves hurried across the park in a gance of browb and gold and red. (this sentence was copied from the book)Ellen andHarl were walking through the trees in the last of the daylight. (Copied) Harl said"I decided to go a long time ago","Eight years", Ellen said slowly . "Eight years without summer or winter". Soon Harl suggested that Hellen should go and travel with him because the scientists were needed.But Ellen said that she couldn't do that. She needed to see trees ,flowers.......Harl moved away from her. "There you are", he said. (Copied) WE both want different things,..."When I get back, I'II say hello to your great-great-granddaughter. Perahaps I'II marry her". Ellen said that she couldn't understand how that could be true. So theywere going to leave Earth in the year 2029 and return in 2129 but theywould only be eight years older. [color=red]"T[/color]here will be other pepople", Harl said."If I marry your great-great-granddaughter, we will call our oldest daugher Ellen."There will be no wives for you in the world of 2129,Ellen said. Harl turned to look att her."You really mean that,dont you? Why not?''Because the world will be a very different place then,she answered To the people of 2129,you will be stranger than a wild animal in a zoo."Why?asked Harl. "Because;Ellen said slowly;you won't be a telepath.
Marieta jan, I see you have read the chapter, but in your report you still have sentences which are like the original ones. What I suggest you is changing the sentences, changing their structure but not the meaning. I hope my comment will help you during the next reports !!!
When we study human language, we are approaching what some might call the "human essence," the distinctive qualities of mind that are, so far as we know, unique to man.NOAM CHOMSKY
