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My family
My family consists of seven people: my grandfather, grandmother, mother, father, sister brother and I. My grandfather and grandmother came to Armenia in 1965 from Syria. Now my grandfather Sargis is 76 years old and my grandmother Xanum is 72 years old. They work in our garden in summer. They both till tasty fruits, for example, a peach, an apple, an apricot etc, as well as vegetables, for example, a water-melon, an eggplant, a tomato. I like them, because they often give me advice, and teach the way of life, which is very important for me. I often I accept their advice. My mother Eghisabet is 36 years old and she is a housewife, she cleans the house everyday. She makes tasty foods and cakes for us. I love my mother’s cakes very much. My father Hovsep is 45 years old, and he also works in our garden. He helps my grandfather and grandmother. My sister Srbuhi is 17 years old. She is a schoolgirl and studies in 12th grade. l love my sister very much. I can share with her. My brother Sargis is 11 years old. He is a schoolboy and he learns in 5th grade. I love my family very much and I am proud of my family. The family is the environment where I feel happy.

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