Everything has a beginning and an end. This world is full of evil and good people. In this world there are many good people than evil people. That’s why good people always win. I am convinced when i saw wonderful movie. People should be sure their forces. When people are allowed he only to think about his life and his family. It’s very important for everyone. Life gives us lessons for our steps. This movie was very interesting, very amazing for me. This girl was very brave and strong. It was a wonderful. Long live the girl that was able to withstand pain. I learned everything from this movie. In life to be strong , clever, and good man. It’s most important to be with your family and love them. It’s very important in this life, because they give to you power, love that you can live. It was a sad story that teaches to live with bad days. So there are many things that we must learn or from movie or from in real life. Life is a precious thing. It should be enjoyed. I am proud of that girl. He is a true hero.
Everything has a beginning and an end. This world is full of evil and good people. In this world there are many good people than evil people. That’s why good people always win. I amgot convincedin this whenI saw a wonderful movie. People should be sure of their forces. When people are allowed they only to think abouttheir lives and their family. It’s very important for everyone. Life gives us lessons for our steps. This movie was very interesting, very amazing for me. This girl was very brave and strong. It was a wonderful movie. Long live the girl that was able to withstand pain. I learned everything from this movie. In lifeit is important to be a strong , a clever, and a good man. It’s most important to be with your family and love them. It’s very important in this life, because they give to you power, love that you can live. It was a sad story that teaches to live with bad days. So there are many things that we must learn either from movies or from in real life. Life is a precious thing. It should be enjoyed. I am proud of that girl. SHe is a true heroine.
Well done Silvi. I enjoyed reading the post as it really expressed all your feelings about what you watched and you shared your thoughts in a very nice way !!!
I really like what you wrote, it was very original and from your heart. The only major thing to check on this is the pronouns... You use he when you should be using she...
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